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Jason Shiffy
05-03-2009, 11:28 PM
I wish someone could wake me up from this nightmare. Sometimes i think the answer is a piece of lead in my 9mm. So far i haven't encountered someone like me. I got radio messages from a man living in a house 10 miles away from me. I arrived there but it was already too late. They broke through the door and destroyed everything. Everything I could use was broken. The only usefull things they didn't bother with was the food in the fridge since they already ate a man called Frits Lawrence, father of 2. I noticed there wasn't a mother figure in the picture that was on the floor, broken. Just 1 man and his son and daughter. On the back of the picture it said 'With the kids'. I dropped the picture and continue my search for something i might use. Suddenly i hear the front door open. I grabbed my gun and aimed it to the entrance of the living room. I knew that it was coming every second now. I was right. It walked in. I haven't seen one this tall. I think it was standing 7 feet tall. It noticed that i had a gun in my hand and his eyes spread wide open. I couldnt pull the trigger. It was jammed. I put all my effort to pull that fucking trigger but the gun refuses to shoot. He notices it. It leaps towards me and i run towards the other entrance of the living room towards the hall and stairs. I go for the stairs and run up as i hear his running behind me, destroying everything in his path. As i run up the stairs i'm still pulling the trigger. Finally it unjams. The large bang scared the shit out of me but there's no time to fully react to it. I aim my gun to it. It realizes that it's over. That its gonna die. It realizes that there's nothing he can do about it. He does that all in 1.2 seconds. 1.2 seconds it took me to pull the trigger. After the gunshot i see his body fall down the stairs. After his body is all the way down, i sit on the floor and smile. I think it was a sign of me being nervous knowing that if my gun didn't unjam i was dead. The smiling stopped. I heard a scream.
Continues next week.
ZBarclay
05-03-2009, 11:37 PM
I wish someone could wake me up from this nightmare. Sometimes i think the answer is a piece of lead in my 9mm. So far i haven't encountered someone like me. I got radio messages from a man living in a house 10 miles away from me. I arrived there but it was already too late. They broke through the door and destroyed everything. Everything I could use was broken. The only usefull things they didn't bother with was the food in the fridge since they already ate a man called Frits Lawrence, father of 2. I noticed there wasn't a mother figure in the picture that was on the floor, broken. Just 1 man and his son and daughter. On the back of the picture it said 'With the kids'. I dropped the picture and continue my search for something i might use. Suddenly i hear the front door open. I grabbed my gun and aimed it to the entrance of the living room. I knew that it was coming every second now. I was right. It walked in. I haven't seen one this tall. I think it was standing 7 feet tall. It noticed that i had a gun in my hand and his eyes spread wide open. I couldnt pull the trigger. It was jammed. I put all my effort to pull that fucking trigger but the gun refuses to shoot. He notices it. It leaps towards me and i run towards the other entrance of the living room towards the hall and stairs. I go for the stairs and run up as i hear his running behind me, destroying everything in his path. As i run up the stairs i'm still pulling the trigger. Finally it unjams. The large bang scared the shit out of me but there's no time to fully react to it. I aim my gun to it. It realizes that it's over. That its gonna die. It realizes that there's nothing he can do about it. He does that all in 1.2 seconds. 1.2 seconds it took me to pull the trigger. After the gunshot i see his body fall down the stairs. After his body is all the way down, i sit on the floor and smile. I think it was a sign of me being nervous knowing that if my gun didn't unjam i was dead. The smiling stopped. I heard a scream.
Continues next week.
So...you're transcribing I Am Legend?
Jason Shiffy
05-04-2009, 12:05 AM
So...you're transcribing I Am Legend?
no.. no i am not. Its gonna be different! No vampires with cancer , trust me its gonna be a good story.
Antonio_Bay
05-04-2009, 09:37 AM
Ooo, a story. Nice.
May want to beak it into smaller paragraphs though instead one a big block of text.
Scottbob75
05-04-2009, 08:37 PM
I love this story. I read it over and over and each time I read it, I WANT MORE!!! At first I was reading it like it was his dream or it happened, but the second time reading it, I got it. Keep us readers on our toes! Great Job!
Lotism
05-04-2009, 10:23 PM
Sounds interesting man, keep working on it.;)
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